檢查一下幾個句子是否有語法錯誤,如果有請改正
檢查一下幾個句子是否有語法錯誤,如果有請改正
Our mission statement is to enrich our after classes life while we just spend less money to enjoy more fun.
We aim at providing a comfortable place and a convenient way for students to have fun and buy magazines.
Our first goal is to earn back our cost and make a profit in a year.
The second goal is to make students around us to keep focusing on our shop services and introduce our shop to more new customers.
The third goal is to attract some new sponsors who want to put advertisements in our shop.
the fourth goal is to open chain shops.
The fourth goal is to open chain shops.
Our mission statement is to enrich our after classes life while we just spend less money to enjoy more fun.
We aim at providing a comfortable place and a convenient way for students to have fun and buy magazines.
Our first goal is to earn back our cost and make a profit in a year.
The second goal is to make students around us to keep focusing on our shop services and introduce our shop to more new customers.
The third goal is to attract some new sponsors who want to put advertisements in our shop.
the fourth goal is to open chain shops.
The fourth goal is to open chain shops.
英語人氣:503 ℃時間:2020-06-24 12:31:53
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
語法湊合,但大量語義冗余...隨便舉幾個例子our mission is就可以了,statement沒必要加afte classes life應該是 after-class life, 這里的"-"不能省略,這不是標點問題,是個語法問題,具體為什么不展開了.另外...
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