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  • 請(qǐng)幫我看看這篇文章有無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?

    請(qǐng)幫我看看這篇文章有無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?
    good morning!/gooding afternoon!/good evering!all of you distinguished judges!
    first of all,let me introduce myself.surely the former speechs of other students are wonderful,but i thought you may be a little bit tired.so let's be more excited now.Iam Ihy,a common student of experiment middle school.i am a little nervous,you must fought it,right?but in fact iam a outgouing boy.i have a lot of hobbys,such as playing badminton,playing pingping ball and so on.sometimes i am going to swim.and now,perhaps you may want to ask me one question"what's your enlgish name?"i would like to tel you all seriously," i have no english name!"i thought a true chinese need not english at all.i think,to learn english is just to make our country much more stronger.at the same time,i love english very much indeed!trust me!iam not a actor,so i thought i don't need to pretend to loving it.i love english,just from the deep soul of myself.that's why i am here!that's all!thank you very much for your listening!
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    英語(yǔ)人氣:822 ℃時(shí)間:2020-03-27 13:10:20
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    第一行g(shù)ood afternoon
    第三行speeches
    第四行but換成and 因?yàn)闆](méi)轉(zhuǎn)折意思
    so let's be more excited now這句不知道你要表達(dá)什么
    you must fought it不太好 你是要說(shuō)“你們一定感覺(jué)到了吧!”嗎 you may feel that
    Iam :i am
    playing badminton,playing pingping ball 后面的playing可以不要了,以免重復(fù)
    sometimes i am going to swim這是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)不用一般將來(lái)時(shí)sometimes i go to swim
    i thought a true chinese need not english at all.你是要說(shuō)要不要英文名字不重要嗎?i thought a english name is not necessary as we are chinese
    pretend to loving it感覺(jué)有點(diǎn)別扭,我也不知道是不時(shí)用-ing形式,你再查一下嘍!
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