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    英語語法問題(下面一篇文章有語法錯誤嗎?)
    Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .
    What is love?
    In fact,love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not easy to give a one sentence definition.
    Love is the rain in spring that can moisten everything.Love is the breeze in summer that can make us feel cool.Love is the fruits in fall that can let us feel the joy of the harvest.And love is the sun in winter that can keep us warm.Love is as beautiful as flowers,love is as wide as the sky.
    In the earthquake in Yushu.Some people lost their lives.And some people lost their home.They were helpless.This time,people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help people in Yushu.Isn't this explain the love is extensive?
    Actually,Love is around us all the time.It will appear with different types.We should make good cherish it.
    My speech is over,thanks.
    英語人氣:754 ℃時間:2020-09-27 06:33:18
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    整體來講不錯,但還是有一些地方可以修改.
    1.I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .
    這句有錯.
    改為:
    It's my pleasure to make a speech here,and the topic is "What Is Love".
    2.love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not easy to give a one sentence definition.
    這句后半句語法有錯,改為:
    love is the eternal topic for human beings,and it's not easy to give it a one sentence definition.
    3.This time,people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help people in Yushu.
    兩個句子之間需要用連詞連接,如果不用連詞的話,就寫成兩個句子而不是用逗號隔開哦.
    改為:
    This time when people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help people in Yushu.
    4.Isn't this explain the love is extensive?
    改為:
    Isn't this explaining the love is extensive?
    5.We should make good cherish it.
    改為:
    We should well cherish it.
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