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  • 幫我看一下有沒有錯誤 英語小作文

    幫我看一下有沒有錯誤 英語小作文
    do you know a hamster thery are a kind of pet.they come from siberia.they are short-bodied,with tails much shorter than body tength,and have small furry ears,short stocks legs,and wide feet.hamsters are nocturnal animals .they are active at night .they are cute and of small size and are easy to take care of.however,they almost sleep all day.as they are small in size ,many people especially young kids ,likes to keep them as pets.they can be kept in cager and be easily taken care of.(先懸,再賞)
    這些不算,語法的
    其他人氣:724 ℃時間:2020-04-25 10:24:44
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    do you know a hamster---do you know hamsters.(因為后面你都是用“they”來敘述,這里最好復(fù)數(shù))
    tength---body's length 是不是打錯了?
    and are easy to take care of--and easy to be taken care of
    they almost sleep all day-- sleep all the day around (你想表達(dá)的是整天都睡覺吧?)
    many people especially young kids ,likes to keep them as pets---many people,especially young kids,like to make them their pets .(many people 后面的逗號很必要,另外你想表達(dá)的是把它們作為動物來養(yǎng),對吧?keep them as pets 有點別扭,不是很地道,用make them their pets 更好.)
    不知道你是幾年級,如果是初中生的,能寫出這樣的文章還是不錯的
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