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I remember it was morning,is too boring.Wash shoes.To the pot before I poured some water,I painted some shoes to washing powder.Then pick up the brush,little by little brush,brush to brush to brush the total can not afford a piece of black spots.I really want to brush clean the black spots.This time,I painted more washing powder,the result that more and more light spots,and finally,finally eliminated it.The water was cold winter,ah,really cold.After washing,I put the shoes on the sun.So I wash my dirty shoes.
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記得那是一天上午,閑著太無聊了.洗鞋子.我先往盆子里倒了一些水,我往鞋子上涂了一些洗衣粉.再拿起刷子,一點一點的刷,刷來刷去總有一塊黑點刷不掉.我一定要把這個黑點刷干凈.這次,我涂了更多的洗衣粉,結果那黑斑越來越淡,最后,終于把它消滅了.冬天的水好涼啊,真冷.洗完后,我把鞋子放在太陽下曬.就這樣洗好我那骯臟的鞋.