1.The twenty-five-year-old man wept when he left Hattiesburg,Mississippi.
when引導(dǎo)狀語
2.This November 10th will be marked as our anniversary.
mark此處用被動(dòng),意為：被記做,被標(biāo)記為.
3.Don’t park the car at Rodeo Dr.Instead,park it at 12 Davies Street.
把車停在陳么地方,用介詞at
4.They spent 130 dollars on buying a new set of nose rings.
spend+金錢+on；spend +時(shí)間+in
5.The Smoots moved to the North because the people there are so nice.
表示Smoot一家人,前要加The.
6.At 7 p.m.this evening,the rodeo will begin in The Town Square.
The Town Square.為專有名詞,必須全部大寫!
7.Yesterday,the Terrorists blew up their houses at 123 Melrose St.
恐怖分子引爆了house,不是引爆了home
8.22 seamstresses were needed to mend prom dresses.
去掉the,修補(bǔ)舞會(huì)服裝,不需要the
9.5 percent of the professors have lost their hair.
去掉about,句子成分完整.若加上about,則句子缺少主語!
10.Miss Smith bet fifty dollars while her brother weighed more than a 1964 Chevy.
前后2部分為轉(zhuǎn)折
11.Estalene Smoots dropped her French class the 1st day of school.
french 為動(dòng)詞,意為做法國菜
12.Sadie Hoots won 3,200,000 dollars on the Wheel of Fortune.
Wheel of Fortune幸運(yùn)輪,專有名詞前要有the,還有一種改法,加上引號(hào)“Wheel of Fortune”則前不用加the了
13.Frustrating that their professor required them to eat fried rutabagas,the students walked out of class at 9 a.m.this morning.
the students 是Frustrating（主動(dòng)）,不是Frustrated（被動(dòng)）
14.The office manager had twenty-one plants,sixty-two cats and puppies.
puppies 復(fù)數(shù)小狗,不可數(shù),前不能加two.改法：直接去掉或把two變成some,若非要表示2只小狗,可以這樣改：two herds of puppies,2窩小狗!
15.President Aubrey Lucas is from Compton,California.
be from 由什么地方來,是什么地方人的意思 (有祖籍那里的意思)所以originally重復(fù)!
16.On October 25th,Ruth Ann Bobetski will turn to 41.
turn不及物動(dòng)詞
17.Goober Hicks lives at 10 West Hardy St.He used to live in a rundown shack on 2803 Williamsburg Rd.
on road固定搭配!
18.Abby gave birth to a nine-pound baby boy.
nine-pound為形容詞!
19.The President invited me to have dinner at the white house,but I could not fit it into my schedule.
句型：invite sb.to sth.
20.Barney the dinosaur will be executed on Tuesday,November 2nd.
11月2日,用序數(shù)詞.
21.The Baby City baseball team lost their final game two to one and climbed dejectedly back into their bus.
bus應(yīng)該是into,onto成爬到bus車頂了,不合邏輯.
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