求改一下這篇英語短文.
求改一下這篇英語短文.
Last summer holiday,I take a vacation with my parents.We went to the natural park and saw many kinds of animals in the park.There are tigers ,monkeys,pandas,lions and bears.But there are a lot of garbage,so they seems not happy.Their life in the natural park ,people should not destroy their home.I will never forget the tirp to the natural park.
錯的地方說明一下、
Last summer holiday,I take a vacation with my parents.We went to the natural park and saw many kinds of animals in the park.There are tigers ,monkeys,pandas,lions and bears.But there are a lot of garbage,so they seems not happy.Their life in the natural park ,people should not destroy their home.I will never forget the tirp to the natural park.
錯的地方說明一下、
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Last summer holiday,i toke(此為講述上個暑假的事,時態(tài)應(yīng)統(tǒng)一為過去時) a vacation to natural park with my parents.We have seen many kinds of animals.Such as tiger,monkey,panda,lion and bear.But there were so many garbage in the park that those animals seem unhappy.They live in the natural park,we,people should not destroy their home.All in all,i'll never forget the trip.
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