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There is no denying that everyone has interests that enrich our life with happiness.Maybe everyone possesses different interests from other people depending on individual preferences such as special field of study or work.However,interests are an neccessarities tie up to an individual's satifaction.
In our life,our interests have been playing a very important role that fill up our leisure time and allow us to sleep soundly.With interests,we are eager to explore the areas that fascinate us and interests are the key to open our mind and feel the world,which connotates that developing interests will benefit us from seeking the new path in this mysterious world.In light of this statement,if you develop a positive interest,the interest will drive you to the success.
On the opposite side,just like a two-side blade.Some interests should be eliminated becasue it has the potential to ruin our life.Such as playing computer games,hanging out with bad guys and eating with irregularity.
From my perspective,we are likely to benefit from the interest we have developed.While,we also should pay attention to refrain the growth of bad interests.