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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to this.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In many coutries,young people are usually have a break rest before the enrolling in the university studies.Some of theme choose to have a travel and some of them decide to take for a work.Whether they choose which way between of them.I think it will be good for thier future life.
In common of the years,more and more people have noted that they couldn't be satisfied to get acknowledge from schools.They think they can learn from social activities,too.After from the examination of university,they always feel there is less stress than before.They have a spare time to do something they like.Meanwhile these young people can get learn how to take advantage of their theority knowledge into the really life.
Universities studies have difference with high shool.If they wanto become good students they must cultivated good study habit such as how to get along with the others.Nobody could teach them.So they must study by themselves in their spare time.
In my opion,some young people take their own time when they finishing high school to take outside activities can help them to improve their capility.They can open their eyes as well.