最近寫(xiě)的英語(yǔ)短文,（50分）
Hello,everyone here.Today I like to give my presentation about today and tomorrow.
we know that there are many discussions about the topic,which teach us to stress on today but not waste the time,tomorrow is far away,we need to do our task that's should be done today and can't be left to do tomorrow,so today's topic I want to give my opinion about the topic.
First,we know we have to pass today,without today we can't have tomorrow,so many of us say today is more important than tomorrow.However,it’s safe to say that we can't miss tomorrow.If we have a very sad day today,we still want to have a good time today; the answer is of course not.We hope we can have a new happy day tomorrow,and forget about the things today.What’s more,lots of philosophers say that the work need to be done should be finish today but to last tomorrow.Yes,it's true we need to do our job in the right time in our ability,but we can see that if we can’t endure the hard work today,do we need to go on our work today,we really can’t put it tomorrow.If we have a good rest,don't we present a better task?There is a thing we must know that lots of celebrities died because of the hard work one day.So I believe that we can do the things tomorrow and the result will be better.
Second,as the famous writher Zhu Ziqing said in his famous writing that we waste time whatever we do,we think,then we waste time,we wash,then we waste time,we read books then we waste time...
I can’t agree with what he said.The interesting thing in our life is nothing but sad about the time we lost.I believe that our happiness in life is just enjoying the small things happen today,no matter whether is important to our task,our study.Maybe when we are old,we will remember that the small things happen in a common day but not study and study.so we need to pay attention to today,but there is no needs for us to do the only things that is useful for our future,we should love today,love the sunshine,love the wind ,and love the snow maybe.
That’s all,everyone,I hope my presentation will give you quite different view about today and tomorrow.
以上是一篇很簡(jiǎn)單的英語(yǔ)演講文章,里面有一些錯(cuò)誤,還有,語(yǔ)法不是很通順,
如果可以的話,可以用括號(hào)（小括號(hào)、中括號(hào)都可以）標(biāo)出錯(cuò)誤的地方,然后幫改正,以便我知道哪里寫(xiě)錯(cuò)了,
如果還能幫我修繕一下使得文章更好的話,我還可以再追加更多分?jǐn)?shù)