away from本句中譯為“離開”
這句話是用詞典翻譯的吧,尤其是第二句,翻譯的一塌糊涂!
especially at smaller banks which find it more difficult ******* well-trained managers away from ……您檢查一下星號部位是不是掉了動詞,如果沒掉的話語法結(jié)構(gòu)就不通.
建議修改：
Middle managers are in demand
The shake-up in banking has left a shortage of good middle-managers, especially at smaller banks which find it more difficult to attractwell-trained managers away from well-staffed larger banks. Other hot areas include loan review officers, technology specialist and auditors.
直譯：
急需中層管理人員
銀行業(yè)務(wù)的大變動使得優(yōu)秀中層經(jīng)理短缺,尤其是那些小銀行發(fā)現(xiàn)想要吸引訓練有素的中層經(jīng)理離開師資精良的大公司變得更加困難了.其他熱門領(lǐng)域還包括貸款檢查官員、技術(shù)專家和審計員.