2009年浙江高考英語作文,求點(diǎn)評(píng)
2009年浙江高考英語作文,求點(diǎn)評(píng)
5月1日,高二三班的學(xué)生志愿者li yue和zhang hua去陽光敬老院（SUNSHINE NURSING HONE)開展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果、打掃、聊天等）.假如你是學(xué)校英語報(bào)的記者,請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語寫一則100~120詞的新聞報(bào)道.
1.時(shí)間地點(diǎn)人物活動(dòng)；2.老人們的反應(yīng)3.簡要評(píng)論
Student Volunteer Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
May first,liyue and zhanghua who came from the class 2 of second year in our school and they have been to the SUNSHINE NURSING HOME as the volunteer.At morning,they took some fresh fruit to the old and the old were gratified.Li and Zhang did some hourse work in the nursing home and made there clean and comfortable.At the moment,the old had eaten fruit with smile.After,they talked to the old and they were all happy.
As a school report ,I have done some interview to the old and most said:"they are good boys and we pleasure to see them again."So I can see the happiness on their face.
I think they are exmple as the senior school students.They know what the old need and they know how to car about the old.If we can try our best for the society,our life would be more harmonious.
5月1日,高二三班的學(xué)生志愿者li yue和zhang hua去陽光敬老院（SUNSHINE NURSING HONE)開展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果、打掃、聊天等）.假如你是學(xué)校英語報(bào)的記者,請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語寫一則100~120詞的新聞報(bào)道.
1.時(shí)間地點(diǎn)人物活動(dòng)；2.老人們的反應(yīng)3.簡要評(píng)論
Student Volunteer Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
May first,liyue and zhanghua who came from the class 2 of second year in our school and they have been to the SUNSHINE NURSING HOME as the volunteer.At morning,they took some fresh fruit to the old and the old were gratified.Li and Zhang did some hourse work in the nursing home and made there clean and comfortable.At the moment,the old had eaten fruit with smile.After,they talked to the old and they were all happy.
As a school report ,I have done some interview to the old and most said:"they are good boys and we pleasure to see them again."So I can see the happiness on their face.
I think they are exmple as the senior school students.They know what the old need and they know how to car about the old.If we can try our best for the society,our life would be more harmonious.
英語人氣：838 ℃時(shí)間：2020-09-30 14:33:30
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
第一句話有語法問題啊.liyue and zhanghua who came from the class 2 of second year in our school 只是主語.沒謂語啊.應(yīng)該把后面的and they 刪了.第二段As a school report,應(yīng)該是As a school reporter,還有, on ...
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