我寫了一篇英語(yǔ)作文,若按中考18分評(píng)分的話,可以得幾分?還有,幫我修改一下全文好嗎?
我寫了一篇英語(yǔ)作文,若按中考18分評(píng)分的話,可以得幾分?還有,幫我修改一下全文好嗎?
My Family Rules
As we all know,a nation has it's rule and a family also has one.In my home,I have a lot of rules.For example,playing the piano everday,do the home work more than2 hours.So I get tired of the family rules.I want to tell my parents some suggestions.If you would like me to be a good boy,you needn't give me a lot of rules and I'll do myself.Because I'm growing up.
My Family Rules
As we all know,a nation has it's rule and a family also has one.In my home,I have a lot of rules.For example,playing the piano everday,do the home work more than2 hours.So I get tired of the family rules.I want to tell my parents some suggestions.If you would like me to be a good boy,you needn't give me a lot of rules and I'll do myself.Because I'm growing up.
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優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
如果中考按18分算的話,本篇短文的得分12分.原因在于：1.字?jǐn)?shù)太少,只有79個(gè)2.用詞不當(dāng)：如in my home（應(yīng)該改為：in my family; some suggestions是復(fù)數(shù)形式,然而內(nèi)容方面只有一點(diǎn)；而且suggestion用在這里不太合適應(yīng)...
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