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　　We admire or envy the success of those billionare like Bill Gates, Sam Walton, and even successful people in all walks of life(其實這里我想用different category).We all have goals, for example, study over 7 hours per day, but the key to success is how to implement this goals. When we grow up, there are so many things that facinate us, taking up study for 7 hours seems to be unreality. Many of us give up our original goals and are capivited by different entertainment. Since there are various opccupation in the society, we got to learn something we are good at or at least able to compete with others. All human beings have desires, including Bill Gates, Sam Waton. The difference between successful people and failure people are successful people know how to give up something, they give up many entertainment like video games, computer games, movies and so on for they understand wisdom is made up of accumulation of knowledge, and they use their time in a very effient way, they devote their spare time in studing to increase their experience and knowledge.That's why they got success. While for those failure people, they aren't success purely because they can't resistdesire or temptation.
　　I don't think I waste time in writing your composition for I think it is a very effient way to improve my English writing skillsand help others who are in difficulty. However, do not just copy and paste what I have written because it considers to be a plagiarism, try to use your own words.