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Styles of good deeds
This world there are a lot of good deeds,some people think that spirit is a kind of good deed,some people think that action is a kind of good deed.Today,i will talk about good deeds.In my opinion,i think good deeds have two styles like spirit and action.
To stare with,a good deed is a kind of spirit.First,smile is very important things,everyone can smile,a smile is a wonderful things.For example,if you want to talk about business,smile would make people to relax,smile will promote the negotiations.The smile really is the benevolence symbol,the joyful fountainhead.Smile can let you to succeed,so smile is a good deed about spirit.Second,smile can batter communicate with people smile is the world’s most amazing thing one.If you always smile,you can make a lot of new friends,because smile is a kind of very good spirit exchanges.In addition,love is anther spirit kind of good deed.First,the family has given you everything,you need to return home.Friends has given you a lot of happiness,you need to return them.For example,if your parents are old,you need to take care of them,and need to give them moral support,often accompany at their side.Give them love.Second,friends has given you a lots happiness and help,you need to return them.For example,if your friends have some problem,you need to help them and give them a hug.Give them moral support.I think it is good deeds about spirit.
Next,i will talk about the action style of good deeds.First of all,i think volunteer is a good thing.Volunteer can help a lot of people.For example,in this world,there are many people who are need of help.Volunteer often help these people,give them some foods or water.Second,volunteer can make people happy and relax.For example,volunteer often show some interesting programs,these programs would make people happy and relaxed.In addition,i think charitable organization is another good thing about action.First,the charitable organization can help poor people and give poor people new home.For example many poor people don't have the money to cure disease,the charitable organization always given this people money and help them find hospital.Second,the charitable organizations often give poor people new home.For example,in Africa,a lot of the poor people,charitable organization often give their help,help them find their own family,helping them to build their own home.
To sum up ,in this world,a lot of people always do some good deeds,i think it is good .i think good deeds have two styles,spirit and action .i hope the people will do good deeds ,often help who need help.