幫我看看這篇英語作文有什么問題吧~（單詞拼寫和語法）【看圖作文】
第一副.沉迷網絡,一個男孩子坐在電腦前,玩游戲,從7級升到8級,8級升9級
第二副.是小男孩騙他爸爸去同學家復習,其實去上網了
第三副.是他爸爸怕他看書累,做點心給他吃
第四副.是個大大問號
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Internet can teach you so many good things; but sometimes it could teach you bad things also.
There was a little boy who loves to play online games,he just couldn't help but keep playing that game.From lavel 7 to level 8,from level 8 to level 9,he kept getting better.
The little boy sometimes would lie to his dad,saying he's going to study at his friend's house,but he's actually going to play the online game.
However,his dad doesn't know,who made the little desert,and worried that the little boy would be "study" too hard!
Somehow,the little boy's dad will know his secret; but,who knows?
(幫我看看這篇英語作文有什么單詞拼寫和語法的問題吧,翻譯的好的加懸賞、、 先寫過,