幫我看看這篇英文有什么地方錯?
看下有那幾個地方錯了,幫我改改!When my eighteenth birthday came,I war not in home.In order to celebrate such important day with my dear parents,I wrote a long letter,in which I thanked him for having raised me for 18 years,and expressed my love for them.Later,Mother tell me when she read the letter,tears were filled her eyes.But Father appeared very cool.After that,he studied it lonely carefully.Then he put it up into a desk drawer.I can imagine the scene clear because I know Father.Being a man with few word,he prefers to show his love for me in a silent way.