你好,作為翻譯而言,本身需要尊重原文,但是我個(gè)人覺得原文開頭過于重復(fù)累贅,所以有所選擇的省略.比如“時(shí)間轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝”（感覺）和“覺得時(shí)間過得真快”,這個(gè)沒有必要重復(fù)描述.
還有“我相信”改為“我承諾,我保證”之類的,更見誠意吧,不是嗎?
前面幾位譯者,就算用翻譯器,也總該檢查一下吧,那么多語法錯(cuò)誤……
How time flies! It will be the end of my college English course. We are going to take the last lesson today. In the past two years, our teacher not only taught us college English, but also enlightened us about the truth and the experience of life. With our teacher’s instruction, my English proficiency has been so greatly improved that I even passed CET4. I should owe it to our teacher!
I promise that I will never give up English learning. I will keep in mind what the teacher have taught me and try to make full use of English in the future of my life. I will do my best to improve my English and strive to reach the level of our teacher.