Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accident.How can we obey the traffic rules?First,in most of China,we keep on the right of the road.Second,before we cross the road,we must stop and look both ways—look left,look right and look left again.Third,we must don’t play on the street.
Last,it’s good to help children and old people crossthe road.
2.in traffic accident ,事故很多,用復(fù)數(shù)形式比較好traffic accidents
3.How can we obey the traffic rules?譯為“我們們?nèi)绾文軌蜃袷亟煌ㄒ?guī)則”,上下句聯(lián)系欠佳,可以換成以下幾種形式：
how can we cut down (decrease /avoid /prevent) this?I think we should obey the traffic rules.
或者That is why we should obey the traffic rules.（這就是我們?yōu)槭裁匆袷亟煌ㄒ?guī)則的原因)
that is why.“這就是.的原因"
或：What should we do to avoid this?i think we shoud obey these traffic rules.
4.we keep on the right of the road.換成we should keep right when walking along the road.
keep right 靠右
5.we must stop and look both ways .表示看的方向時(shí)最好用direction,換成we must stop and look both directions
6.Third,we must don’t play on the street.語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,換成：Third,we mustn’t play on the street.表示禁止做…
7.Last,it’s good to help children and old people cross the road.
英語(yǔ)時(shí)間順序的表達(dá)應(yīng)該是：first,second,then,at last / finally；last換成at last 或者finally
it’s good to do sth.和 help sb (to) do sth：to可以省略,這兩個(gè)句型結(jié)構(gòu)用的好,表達(dá)清楚,簡(jiǎn)潔.
參考例句(文)
1.how can we cut down (decrease /avoid /prevent) this?
2.That is why we should obey the traffic rules.（這就是我們?yōu)槭裁匆袷亟煌ㄒ?guī)則的原因)
3.What should we do to avoid this?i think we shoud obey these traffic rules.
4.we should keep right when walking along the road.
5.we mustn’t play on the street