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I'm writing to tell you 【anything 改成 something】 about how we students use the Internet.As we all know 【it 刪除】,the Internet is palying 【a 改成 an】 important part in our daily life.we often read news at home and abroad and 【learning 改成 learn】 foreign lauguages by ourselves on the Internet.Sometimes we 【sent 改成send】 e-mails to our families as well as our friends.Besides,we 【listen 加入 to】 music,enjoy films and play computer games on it.We can 【ever 改成 even】 do shopping without leaving our homes.However,it has 【it's 改成 its】 disadvantages.We waste too much time playing computer games,【what 改成 which】 has a bad effect on our studies.What's worse,the bad information on the Internet does great harm to us.I hope we can make use of the Internet 【proper 改成 properly】 for our studies.