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We are all busy talking about and (using) the Internet which (加入was) set up in the 1960s.At first,the Internet was only used by the government,(however),in the early 1970s,(去掉the) universities,hospitals and banks were allowed to use it (too).However,computers were still expensive and the Internet was difficult to use (去掉it).(At) the start of the 1990s,computers (became) cheaper and easier.Today it is easy to get on line and it is told that millions of people use the Internet every day.(Sending) e-mail are more and more popular (with/among) students.It has become one of the most important parts of people's life.