"In current societies,it is universally accept that social ability is playing an increasingly dominant role in children’s life"
換成accepted
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"The issue of whether parents should shoulder the responsibility of establishing the talent of social or school should is of interest about many people"
"The issue of whether parents or school should shoulder the responsibility of establishing the talent of social life,is of interest about many people"
稍微懂了個手術(shù),原來那個看的我有點迷糊.另外talent of social,social后面你得加個詞阿...
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"However,as we all know,friendship is the cornerstone of the society,which needs putting people together,school can do this."
"However,as we all know,friendship is the cornerstone of the society,which is needed in order to put people together,and school can do this."
你說的"this"我不知道你是指學(xué)校可以把人放在一起還是學(xué)校可以創(chuàng)建friendship
如果你的意思是學(xué)?？梢詐ut people together那就這樣就行了
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"That is not to say it is impossible to cultivate the children to be good members of society that parenting education"
"That is not to say it is impossible to cultivate the children to be good members of society by home educating."
這個parenting education(教人如何做家長)和home education(不上學(xué)校在家里學(xué))可是兩回事啊 我不知道你說的是哪個
我猜是第二個所以我給改了
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Parents can impart the experiences from themselves,which are more vivid than that knowledge from books.
這句里把"that knowledge" 換成 "the knowledge".錯了你磚頭砸我.
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"On the other hand,to be a good member of society demand students solve the problems between peoples."
"On the other hand,being a good member of society demands students to solve the problems among people."
among用在三個或者更多.between用在兩個之間
人的復(fù)數(shù)是people,雖然也有用peoples的
剩下的你自看順眼不順眼.你讓我說我也說不出個所以然來...
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The fact is that more often than not the experiences usually cannot to be practiced while after learning,because nobody counter-communicates with children.
我才疏學(xué)淺不知道這句話什么意思 但是這個看著變扭 more often than 后面是不是還應(yīng)該有一個名詞
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"As a conclusion"
"In conclusion"
這個看著更利索點
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"parenting absolutely not a unique way to teaching those children to be excelling members of society in the status quo."
"parenting is absolutely not the only way to teaching those children to become excelling members of society in the status quo."
unique = 特殊的,獨特的,過了這個村沒這個店的
not the only way = 不只這一個方式
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Thus,we should schooling and parenting goes hand in hand,not only schools or parents should do this,but also all of society as well.
Thus,we should let schooling and parenting goes hand in hand.Not only schools or parents should do this,but also all of society as well.
should 后面應(yīng)該有一個動詞 另外我不知道你最后兩句話是不是聯(lián)在一塊的(看起來是)
如果是的話就不能跟第一句連著
我爪子麻了