Today is Saturday and it is hot.In the morning,I did my homework at the desk.After supper,I had a noon break for some time.My friend xx called me at two o’clock in the afternoon.He asked me to go...今天我們這下雨，寫晴天是不是太。。。前面改為 Today is Sunday.Although it rained, I went to the park with some of my riends wuth unbrellas in the morning
后面一句改為 Then we went to the lakeside abd saw many people were going boatingin the rain（冒雨）
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