that let me fall in love with travelling 改成 that made me fall in love with travelling
I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful scenery 改成I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful sceneries.
Also I make so many new friends during the journey. 改成Also I can make so many new friends during the journey. 這樣時態(tài)上才較為統(tǒng)一.
However, travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 改為 Travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 即去掉However,因為它與but意思重復(fù).
Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travel with me, 改為 Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travelled/have travelled with me, 時態(tài)不正確
I can’t stop to cry 改為 I can’t stop crying 意思是”禁不住落淚“
because we have so many good time together and I don’t want to be apart. 改為 because we have had so many good time together and we don’t want to be apart. 時態(tài)問題和人稱問題.
travel around the world is my dream 改為travelling around the world is my dream 主語從句