是孩子寫的吧?總體來說挺不錯(cuò),但是在初學(xué)階段,最好避免用and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.這種從句,要把句子分開,說明白,可以說In the afternoon,my father asked me to help him water the plant.I finished the work and felt very happy,the flowers are smiling in the wind beautifully.
另外,最后一句應(yīng)該用was而不是is.還有,unforgetive不好,可以換成外國人更加常用的amazing
大家?guī)臀铱纯催@篇英語作文有沒有語法錯(cuò)誤?
大家?guī)臀铱纯催@篇英語作文有沒有語法錯(cuò)誤?
It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.
It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.
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