哪位大神幫我看看我寫的這篇英語短文有沒有語法或者哪方面的錯誤 幫著糾正一下
為了達到節(jié)省成本的目的選擇了在一些勞動力成本較低的國家進行產(chǎn)品的加工制造
例如他選擇了在中國的富士康進行加工制造
在銷售地區(qū)多選擇饑餓式營銷等手段以達到產(chǎn)品價格的穩(wěn)定甚至價格上漲
In order toachieve
the purpose of cost saving choice in some countries with low labor costs of
processing and manufacturing of the products
For example he chose foxconn for processing and
manufacturing inChina
Choice hunger marketing in the sales region,in order to
achieve stable product prices even higher prices
蘋果所制造的產(chǎn)品風(fēng)靡全球,蘋果成為全球市值最高的上市公司,2011年公司利潤高達259億美元,持有現(xiàn)金及有價證券810億美元,超過美國國庫.
但對于另一些人來說,蘋果可能配不上“偉大”二字,和許多曾經(jīng)為科技創(chuàng)新做出卓越貢獻的企業(yè)一樣,在社會責(zé)任履行上,卻不完滿.
Apple made products
popular all over the world,become the world's most valuable listed company,
company profits as much as $25.9 billion in 2011,$81 billion in cash and
marketable securities,and more than United States Treasury.
But for others,apple may not deserve the word
"great",and many have made outstanding contributions for science and
technology innovation of enterprises,on the social responsibility to fulfill,
but did not complete.
蘋果公司在中國對中國消費者的售后服務(wù)遠不如在外國例如說手機出了問題可以享受整機更換服務(wù) 然而卻并沒有在中國實現(xiàn)這些中國相關(guān)監(jiān)督組織要求蘋果公司道歉并且提高售后服務(wù)質(zhì)量以達到讓中國顧客滿意
Apple after-sales service for Chinese consumers in
China than in foreign such as mobile phones out of the question can enjoy
service the replacement,however,did not achieve these China related
supervision organizations in China demanded an apology from apple and improving
the service quality in order to let the Chinese customers