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  • 英語文章糾錯

    英語文章糾錯
    my summer vacation
    The summer vacation had come round again.I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while.Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation,I made a plan as to how to spend it.First,I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise,such as walking,running and rowing,to keep me physically strong.It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did,because I lived up to what I had planned.
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    英語人氣:929 ℃時間:2020-10-01 22:59:37
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    The summer vacation had COME again.I was happy that I could FORGET school at least for a while.Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation,I made a plan ON how to spend it.First,I thought I should go over all those things my teachers HAD taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up SOME EXERCISE,such as walking,running and rowing,to keep me physically strong.It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did,because I lived up to what I had planned.
    改過的地方用大寫了.
    其他錯誤我覺得應(yīng)該是沒有了,但是讀起來覺得表達(dá)蠻奇怪的,有的地方有點累贅.你是寫這個暑假嗎?那用一般過去時就夠了.還有我覺得倒數(shù)第二句的should 可以改成would或could,不懂你在那里是想表達(dá)什么意思就是了.
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