because 和 so 一般不同時(shí)出現(xiàn)在在一個(gè)句子里,而且because of 后面不能跟句子.
所以把because of 去掉
變成：people are bombarded with various advertisements,so they sometimes find it hard to decide which product to buy.
being前面要加are,be being done 現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
變成：In many countries,traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food snow.
邏輯上的錯(cuò)誤,主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是to cope with so much homework,用it來做形式主語(yǔ)
變成：It's very difficult for young children to cope with so much homework.
pay改為paying,現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)
變成：Some employers focus on academic qualifications,paying less attention to life experiences and personal qualities.