請(qǐng)英語(yǔ)高手們幫我看看這篇小作文中的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
The unforgetful Experience in my Childhood
Generally speaking,my memory of childhood is sweet,although there had a little interlude occasionally ,which also made me happy when I think back..
When I was a student in primary school ,my achievements was in the forefront of the class,only one time,I test very bad ,I was very afraid that father and mother will blame me ,therefore I had not told the result matter to them,whenever they mentioned,I only said the result has not been announced.By coincidence,one day ,when my mother went to school to pick me up,then she had kown the whole thing .To my surprise ,she wasn’t angry ,just took me to my teacher,examined my test sheet,clarified my low result was just because of my carelessly rather than my lazy for studying .Later ,my mother told me the result not mean all,draw lessons from it was more important,which made me understood what’s the true meaning of study.
I must thank my mother for her tolerance.I pround of having the love of my parents.Just because of giving the good education by my parents,I had a joyful childhood full of the sunlight .I thought that I will not disappoint them,certainly will let my life be more splendid.
給我改改錯(cuò)誤,時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)法,要給全班看的,錯(cuò)太多了,好丟臉的,嘻嘻,