As we can see everyday,more and more parents are picking their children up after school ,and what comes along is the phenomenon that more and more cars are gathering around our school gate,which of course has caused a lot of traffic pressure.What's more ,some of the students' not observing the taffic rules also becomes one of the well reasons that result in the terrible traffit jam.In addition,the government should be equally blamed for thier neglecting the construction of necessary traffic lights,which undoubtfully leaves considerable safety problems remaining to be settled.
As theinternational conference on climate concluded in Copenhagen,everyone of us should also make it our duty to lead a low-carbon life and protect our environment .As little a thing as walking to school can even help,which will accordingly contribute to reliefing the traffic jam outside our school gate. Is it beyond our reach?
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