However,the rules are only embodied system-level things,the values system is （a） cornerstone to propel system establishment.Western (countries’)1 values are (included of two:)2 on the one hand,(Western countries value is)2 from the time of the French Revolution,liberty,equality and fraternity thinking.On the other hand,it is the transplantation by(of) traditional Western Christian culture.(The system of )3 Western countries is a kind of freedom alliance system,their strength(s) often come from the creation of free lethargy.
注：1,作為名詞來(lái)用,負(fù)數(shù)后面該加撇號(hào)；如果當(dāng)形容詞,就該用 Western country values.
2,建議刪除刮弧內(nèi)文字,既然用on the one hand,On the other hand,這些就變得多余了,且使文章變得啰嗦,不流暢.如果要選擇前者,只能二取其一,去除on the one hand,On the other hand,用數(shù)字1,2 代替.
3,在前面加 The system of 才能使 Western countries 復(fù)數(shù)后面的is 顯得正確,所謂主謂一致也.