樓上的：
請不要來亂評論別人寫的作文
我為什么不能用 two different views?
比起只討論一方面,我選擇討論兩種觀點.
還有,Issue 這個詞,可以用來指很多事情.
沒有誰規(guī)定只能指很大的觀點.
Of 后面,也可以跟 Mobile phones
The issue of sthing
The issue of using mobile phones
The issue of mobile phones
本來就是在討論和手機有關(guān)的事情.
又不一定要用 of using mobile phones in our school.
至于你說的“后面錯的更離譜”
請你指出來,我后面哪里錯了.
謝謝.
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The view of using mobile phone in our school
There are two different views on the issue of mobile phones in schools. Some believe that students should be able to use mobile phones in school because there are many advantages to doing so. For one thing, if an emergency were to occur at the school, the students would immediately be able to use their mobile phones to reach their parents and relatives. Also, if a student's parents wanted to reach the student, they can send a text message to the student as opposed to having to call the office and then getting transferred. However, there are also some who believe otherwise. If someone called in during a lesson, the ringing of the mobile phone would clearly disrupt the class, and students might be more tempted to send text message during class. Furthermore, students might use the mobile phones to cheat on exams, and this would cause many controversies. Overall, the advantages are balanced with the disadvantages, and it is ultimately the school's decision whether or not to allow mobile phones.
171個字.自己寫的.
不知道這是不是你想要的?
如果太長的話,我可以改短.