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my parents.The weather was bad.It was raining all day long.We tried to go to some places of interest such as the Bund and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.However,it was very crowded.Because of the rain,we couldn't see things clearly.We went shopping later.The things were also very expensive,so we didn't buy anything.We didn't do a lot of things during the trip.The trip was boring and I didn't have a good time.
天氣很糟糕,整天都下雨.我們試圖去一些旅游景點譬如外灘和東方明珠電視塔.但是,那里很擁擠.因為下雨,我們景色看不清.我們后來去購物.東西很貴,所以我們沒有買任何東西.我們在旅行中沒有做很多事情.旅行很無聊而且我玩的不開心.