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ILoveShimen
I study in Shimen Experimental Middle School.It’s a beautiful school with many trees,flowers and buildings.It’s not very big but it makes us comfortable.This is one of the reasons that I love Shimen.Another reason is Shimen makes me has more confidence and be a clear girl.
When I was in primary school .I was very quiet and my achievement wasn’t very good. I didn’t like to talk with the others , so most classmates didn't like me so I had few friends. At that time,I didn’t have confidence and more and more quiet.
But now I have been an outgoing girl.Because when I entered Shimen Experimental School,the teachers and classmates all believed me and letted me be the monitor of our class,I was very happy and felt that I was useful.
Now I often hand up and answer the teachers’ qustions and attend many activities. I have many friends in our school and classmates all like to talk with me. I usually very busy but I am very happy about my change. So I love Shimen and thank it very much!
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