I and my friends went to a picnic in the parkOne day,the father said to take me to a picnic in the park,I'm very excited,immediately ready to equipment and food,ready to go.I'll buy the water,father o...可以在簡短一點嗎？太長了。。。你改一下我會給你加分的！O(∩_∩)O謝謝I and my friends went to a picnic in the parkOne day, the father said to take me to a picnic in the park, I'm very excited, immediately ready to equipment and food, ready to go.I'll buy the water, father of driving. I hurriedly get on the bus, and then set out. At the park, I first take everything down, and then find a suitable place for a picnic, and put the food down..I saw some in riding a bicycle some eat some in the paintingToday is my most happy day it is rewarding for a day.譯文我和朋友們一起去公園野餐一天，爸爸說要帶我去公園野餐，我非常興奮，立刻準備好裝備和食物，準備出發(fā)。我先買水，爸爸去開車。我趕緊上車，然后就出發(fā)了。到了公園，我先把東西都放下來，然后找了個適合野餐的地方，再把食物放下去。。我看見有的在騎自行車 有的在吃東西 有的在畫畫今天是我最快樂的一天也是有收獲的一天。 你參考一下吧 希望有用