As far as I am concerned,there are a lot of serious social problems in China today,such as the unemployment,the business fraud and the environment pollution and so on.These problems are very serious,which we need to pay more attention to.
In my opinion,the reasons why it is hard for university graduates to be employed are that there are abundant labours and that there is a lack of enough jobs.Because of this,competition in talent market is very ferocious and brain drain has been caused.
As for business fraud,law enforcement systems need to be strenthened because businessmen try every means to seek profit.As a result,serious compitition in commercial circles and consumers' rights are harmed.
One more problem is the environment pollution,which has been caused by wrong developing stretergies and large numbers of high energy-consumption industries.The bad effects are that human's living conditions have been degraded and that some endanged animals are faced with a more danerous situation.
Therefore,we need our government to help us solve these problems.And only in this way can we solve these problems efficiently.
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