找人幫忙修改英語作文,初三的（上海）
I Will Succeed 字?jǐn)?shù)要求：60字以上
開頭已給：Everyone has difficulties in his life...
1、When you are in trouble,what will you say to yourself?
2、What will you do?(Give at least one example)
Everyone has difficulties in his life,and so do I.Different people have different ideas when one is in trouble.At that time,I will say to myself:"I will succeed.",besides,I will work harder and harder and never give up.Nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it.Where there is a will,there is a way."I will succeed"is the best encouragement when I meet with any difficulty.
那個……不僅是語法錯誤需要修改出來,還有任何用詞不當(dāng)、搭配不當(dāng)、文意重復(fù)、偏離題目之類都要修改出來……
總之就是大家來找茬,找得越多越好……修改得越完整越好……詞匯用得越淺顯越好,句子用得越復(fù)雜越好…………
TVT……拜托了!