Today is my frist day of school.
下面表達(dá)有點(diǎn)混亂,不知道你的意思.
I was disppointed by my classmates, since they arrived until the school is finished they were talking all the time.
That's really repugnanted me, especially in my classroom.
I kown what should do, what should't.
In order to changed my life, I must keep to it,(這里的IT是指什么?表達(dá)不清.)hang in there until I finish my study.
Then,I sat at the frist row of the classroom.
It's remain me what did together during our summer hoildays.
（它提醒了我暑假一起做的事.It's指什么?together是和誰一起,和你做第一排有什么關(guān)系?完全看不懂哪里來的這一句）
We now in different classes.如果說班級,用IN CLASS
I wish both of us can successfully completed our studies .
Come on brother! We certainly will succeed!
Tommrrow belong to the real brave man!I believe in that!
So should you!
在你原文的基礎(chǔ)上改的.修正了一些語法.
你應(yīng)該多看一些外國的小短文.了解外國人寫作的習(xí)慣.
你的句子的模式還很中國化,外國人可能很難理解.
比如說,最后一句,我堅(jiān)信,你呢?
外國人不會這么講,他可能會說,我堅(jiān)信,你也應(yīng)該相信!
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the frist day of school .I was disppointed at my classmates,so from just got to school until the bell has rang for the class they talking all the time.it's repugnant to me even into my classroom.but I kown what should to do ,what should't to do.in order to changed my life and fate I must keep to it,don't stop until my studies finished.then I sat the frist row of the classroom .it's remain me what did together during our summer hoildays.
now we learned at different classes.I holp we can successfully completed our studies .come on brother!it's certain that we shall succeed!tommrrow belong who is a really brave man!I think so.what about you?
the frist day of school .I was disppointed at my classmates,so from just got to school until the bell has rang for the class they talking all the time.it's repugnant to me even into my classroom.but I kown what should to do ,what should't to do.in order to changed my life and fate I must keep to it,don't stop until my studies finished.then I sat the frist row of the classroom .it's remain me what did together during our summer hoildays.
now we learned at different classes.I holp we can successfully completed our studies .come on brother!it's certain that we shall succeed!tommrrow belong who is a really brave man!I think so.what about you?
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