幫我批改一下英語作文吧,
幫我批改一下英語作文吧,
May,20th,Saturday
Yesterday,I with my classmate planed to climbing worth mountain and had a picnic.In the morning,we called togather at 7 o'clock in school gate.Soon,it was raining,but we took bicycle continue,and we arrived the foot of the mountain for an hour later.For a moment,the rain was stoped,so we climbed the mountain and appreciate great sign.Then,we took photographes,sang,leaped,made games,cheesed,and felt so happy.At last,after lunch,we went down the mountain and all people felt too tired.
May,20th,Saturday
Yesterday,I with my classmate planed to climbing worth mountain and had a picnic.In the morning,we called togather at 7 o'clock in school gate.Soon,it was raining,but we took bicycle continue,and we arrived the foot of the mountain for an hour later.For a moment,the rain was stoped,so we climbed the mountain and appreciate great sign.Then,we took photographes,sang,leaped,made games,cheesed,and felt so happy.At last,after lunch,we went down the mountain and all people felt too tired.
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首先日記格式不對(duì),請(qǐng)參照如下標(biāo)準(zhǔn).英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個(gè)部分組成.日記常以第一人稱記下當(dāng)天生活中的所見、所聞、所做或所想的事情.中、英文的日記三格式大致一樣.英語日記的書端是專門寫日記的日期、星期和...
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