你的文章不在怎么改呀?嗎上I want to be an architect in the future. Because I like architecture very much. I will build a lot of good constructions if my dream comes true. I know I will also be very tired ,because it is difficult to be an architect . I must study hard for my dream. This is my dream,and you ?不知道你后面想要表達什么意思啊所以我就按我的意思寫了你看看哪里要改。謝謝你 我是初二的學生 你呢我比你大多了，大學都畢業(yè)了。。。如果我的回答可以的話，請給我加分或者贊一下吧。剛進知道沒多久。謝謝。應該我謝你(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……在哪所大學畢業(yè)