誰(shuí)能幫我改一下這個(gè)英語(yǔ)作文.

誰(shuí)能幫我改一下這個(gè)英語(yǔ)作文.
We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What a beautifu place!"I said.Then we visited the different kinds of Chinese traditional garden and took some photos.We also learned a lot of knowledge.
When we have fun exploring,I noticed Li Lei was lost.We really worried about him and asked a guard for help.Thanks goodness!We found him at last.Then we enjoyed ourselves.
What a special day!

英語(yǔ)人氣：238 ℃時(shí)間：2019-12-19 03:39:06

優(yōu)質(zhì)解答

brings---brought（昨天的事,應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)）
garden---gardens（復(fù)數(shù)）
have---had（時(shí)態(tài)）
Then we enjoyed ourselves.可改成：Then we came back home.（玩得差不多了,就可以回家了）請(qǐng)問(wèn)還有嗎？Chinese traditional---traditional Chinesereally worried---were really worried 希望對(duì)你有啟發(fā)，如對(duì)你有幫助，請(qǐng)記得及時(shí)采納Chinese traditional garden是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)園林的意思是形容詞的排序，traditional應(yīng)該在Chinese前面：一座中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)園林：a traditional Chinese garden

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