Over the South Pole . 這個(gè)是我看著中文譯的,但是覍得譯的不好,幫我看看哪寫(xiě)的不好?
The American explorer, Mr.R.E.Byrd, flew over The North Pole. Three years later, he first flew over The South Pole in 1929. At the beginning, though Byrd and his assisants took lots of photographs which were endless mountains below his plane. But they fell in trouble quickly. the aircraft seemed to be crashed someplace. It was able to get over this mountains , if the plane climbed up to 10,000 feet high. Byrd ordered his assisants to throw out two heavy food sacks, so the plane could rise again. It was above 400 feet high that the plane flew over the mountains. Byrd knew that he could reach The South Pole which was only 300 miles away from here, because there was no mountains ahead. It was easy for plane to fly over this immense white field.


It was above 400 feet high that the plane flew over the mountains.這句話(huà)寫(xiě)的對(duì)嗎?
我知道強(qiáng)調(diào)句的，但是總覍得哪里寫(xiě)的不對(duì)，所以問(wèn)問(wèn)你，謝謝呀