建議用一般過(guò)去時(shí)描述研究?jī)?nèi)容,結(jié)論可以保持現(xiàn)在時(shí).
It concludes that……-> It was concluded that……
……the upper limit between……->……the upper limit is between……
2)結(jié)構(gòu)有點(diǎn)亂,用with aspect是想表達(dá)什么?maybe need to specify what aspect?
close relationship->direct relationship
with the coefficient ……-> with correlation coefficients as high as…… respectively……aspect=Slope aspect 坡向。坡地一般分為朝東、南、西、北,四個(gè)坡向。我這個(gè)研究?jī)?nèi)容劃分為360個(gè)坡向?!璽he upper limit between……->……the upper limit is between……后面的is不能省略?with aspect是想表達(dá)針葉林的面積隨0~360°坡向的連續(xù)變化情況。ok,那么建議寫(xiě)成variation of slop aspect,更便于理解。是的,后面的is不能省略,否則句子不完整,缺謂語(yǔ)(你或許在口語(yǔ)中見(jiàn)到有省略,但是書(shū)面語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)法要求更加嚴(yán)格一些)。
請(qǐng)寫(xiě)作達(dá)人幫忙看看,論文摘要中有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?
請(qǐng)寫(xiě)作達(dá)人幫忙看看,論文摘要中有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?
是否地道?哪些需要修改?
Abstract:Slope aspect has a significant effect on the
development and distribution of montane forest,especially in arid and semiarid
regions.This paper,using SPOT5 images and 1:50000 DEM,extracts and analyzes
detailed spatial information of montane coniferous forest (mainly Qinghai
spruce),and thereby explores how the upper and lower limits and altitudinal
range of the coniferous forest vary along all the aspects and how annual
insolation affects the area of coniferous forest in the Helan Mountains located
in the transitional zone of arid and semiarid areas of China.It concludes that:
1) in the eastern flank of the Helan Mts.,the lower limit of coniferous forest
is between 1600~2000m asl.,and the upper limit between 2800~3000m asl; in the
western flank,the lower limit of coniferous forest is between 2000~2300m asl.,
and the upper limit between 2800~3100m asl.2) The area of coniferous forest
takes on a normal distribution with aspect,and the R2 of
fitting results is 0.954,0.986 and 0.990,and the RMSE 4.632,4.004 and 5.285,
respectively,for the eastern flank,western flank and the whole mountain.3)
The altitudinal ranges of coniferous forest are between 806m~1435m,438m~1140m
for eastern flank and western flank,respectively.4) The area of coniferous forest
has a close relationship with annual insolation,with the coefficient of
correlation (R) between them as high as -0.9714,-0.8579 and -0.9578,for the
eastern flank,western flank and the whole mountain,respectively,indicating
that the aspect-related distribution area of coniferous forest has a
significant negative correlation with annual insolation.This spatial model
reveals quantitatively the significant effect of slope aspect on thedistribution of coniferous forest in northwest arid China.
是否地道?哪些需要修改?
Abstract:Slope aspect has a significant effect on the
development and distribution of montane forest,especially in arid and semiarid
regions.This paper,using SPOT5 images and 1:50000 DEM,extracts and analyzes
detailed spatial information of montane coniferous forest (mainly Qinghai
spruce),and thereby explores how the upper and lower limits and altitudinal
range of the coniferous forest vary along all the aspects and how annual
insolation affects the area of coniferous forest in the Helan Mountains located
in the transitional zone of arid and semiarid areas of China.It concludes that:
1) in the eastern flank of the Helan Mts.,the lower limit of coniferous forest
is between 1600~2000m asl.,and the upper limit between 2800~3000m asl; in the
western flank,the lower limit of coniferous forest is between 2000~2300m asl.,
and the upper limit between 2800~3100m asl.2) The area of coniferous forest
takes on a normal distribution with aspect,and the R2 of
fitting results is 0.954,0.986 and 0.990,and the RMSE 4.632,4.004 and 5.285,
respectively,for the eastern flank,western flank and the whole mountain.3)
The altitudinal ranges of coniferous forest are between 806m~1435m,438m~1140m
for eastern flank and western flank,respectively.4) The area of coniferous forest
has a close relationship with annual insolation,with the coefficient of
correlation (R) between them as high as -0.9714,-0.8579 and -0.9578,for the
eastern flank,western flank and the whole mountain,respectively,indicating
that the aspect-related distribution area of coniferous forest has a
significant negative correlation with annual insolation.This spatial model
reveals quantitatively the significant effect of slope aspect on thedistribution of coniferous forest in northwest arid China.
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