第三句 換成 He became famous all over the world because of Titanic.第四句話文意有些不通啊 這段總體沒什么語法錯誤,但是很中國啊 把你第一句的都換成被動語態(tài)吧幫我換一下好嗎，然后把修改的一段發(fā)過來Do you knowLeonardoDicaprio?Many called him” Jake ”ten years ago who is one of the most highlyy paid actors in Hollywood now . He becamefamousallovertheworldbecouseofTitanic . ActuallyLeonardo wasverythinbefore .( 我不大明白你想說的意思啊)Prince, fatty,liar orlunatic ,nomatterwhoheis,therearehislovers .That 'swherehischarmlies 能用中文說你想寫的句子嗎？就是那句話，如果你不了解萊昂納多，你不會知道他曾經(jīng)狠狠的瘦過，你覺得這句話該怎么說Although he is very health currently,he has been emaciated at one time. 改成這句好了 你那句原話不大像是外國人說的啊啊啊你說的這句好難啊，能不能簡單點，不過你覺得我那句同學(xué)們能明白嗎Although he is very health currently,he has been thinat one time 這樣好吧As I am excited about is that disappear in a meaningful movie, as well as a meaningful role這句話有錯嗎有錯啊 as 用在開頭是因為 而且是從句才可以用 What I am excited aboutis that disappear in a meaningful movie, as well as a meaningful role.