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Changes
You may consider that abroad life is very boring. Because the language barrier we can not make many friends and do not know how to deal with the plenty of spare time. But I think, abroad life let my life be wonderful.
I was lazy before and I did not like doing housework. Do any thing all need mother’s help. But now, I am a hardworking person. I can do a lot of housework. Such as cleaning the room, washing the dishes, cooking, doing the shopping and so on. I think doing the housework can help me grow up and to be independent.
In high school, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. But now I like to make friends and take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer shopping and hiking with my friends. So I am becoming much healthier than before. Sometimes,the school organizes many cultural experience activity, so that I can make a lot of friends also can learn more about Korea. When approaching holidays, We will make travel plans, usually with the least money to go to more places. Although very tired, but we are very satisfied.
I love my changes, because every day have been very substantial and meaningful (220)