Topic:Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are relatively cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 
In the many parts of the world,articles are very expensive for people to buy in the past.However,because it is more likely now that high-technology produce these articles easier,supply and demand keep on reduce,so consumer goods becoming cheaper than before.
While some people think this may be damaging to business circle,the low price increase the competitive of companies,they have no choice but to reduce the staff or cut down aggregate investment to ensure their profits,some companies even use inferior materials and turn out substandard products to make an improper profit,in fact there are many advantages to reduce the expense for articles.
One explanation might be that the lower price enable most of people to use these goods and enjoy the happiness them brought to people.For instance,computer now is popular with thousands of families,but in the middle of 19th century,it is only can be used by the person who is super rich.People can sit in front of computer surfing the Internet and chatting with friend whatever where they are rather than helplessly watching the rich.
Another advantage of decreasing the cost of merchandises is that in terms of the salesman,cut down the profit margin in order to sell more.In particular,if they sell at a discount,then more people will come to buy,it will not only raise the quantity of sale but also in favor of reduce stocks.In the context of the financial crisis,this point is becoming especially important.
So overall,I believe that both the consumer and the producer will profit from cheaper prices of consumer goods.
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