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  • Having read your ad in the newspaper,I feel I'm fit the job,so I'm writing to apply for that.I'm a 21-year-old girl,1.68

    Having read your ad in the newspaper,I feel I'm fit the job,so I'm writing to apply for that.I'm a 21-year-old girl,1.68 meters tall.As a graduate from Chengdu Huaxi Travel School,I spoke not only standard Putonghua,but also excellent English.I got the first place in English competition last year.I was also the winner of a computer contest.Interested in Chinese history,geography or culture,I have read a lot of about them,particular those of Chengdu.So I konw its places of interest like the back of your hand.In addition to,I worked part-time as a guide for one year when at school.Giving the job,I'm sure to make a good guide.My telephone number is 8432161.Hope to hear from you soon.
    要求改十處。
    其他人氣:382 ℃時間:2020-05-31 05:54:18
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    1.第1行 fit -> fit for 適合的
    2.第2行 Travel School -> Tourist School 旅游學(xué)校
    3.第3行 spoke -> speak 現(xiàn)在一般時即可,表示現(xiàn)在的情況
    4.第4行 in English competition -> in the English competition 特指加定冠詞
    5.第5行 a lot of -> a lot 后面沒有跟名詞,用a lot即可
    (第6行 konw是拼寫輸入錯吧 know)
    6.第7行 In addition to -> In addition (不要to)
    7.第7行 worked -> had worked (后面有for one year,前面要用完成時,用過去完成時)
    8.第7行 when at school -> when I was at school,要么at school (不能說when at school)
    9.第7行 Giving -> Given (job被給予,用過去分詞)
    10.第8行 make -> be / become (make 讓做,要說成為用be/become)
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