各位幫我看看幾句英文語(yǔ)法對(duì)不
1.She is an outstanding student and I was deeply impressed with her not only she is a specific student in our department, but more importantly, because of the capability and eagerness for further academic pursuit she demonstrated while learning the knowledge involved in my class.（not only后面要加because嗎）
2.Miss Wu always do the homework seriously, she aim herself as one of the member in our department.（中間不加and可以嗎）
3.What’s more, not only is she inquisitive and keen to probe into new problems and knowledge, and also can she devote herself to the detailed, elementary, time-consuming works in solving problems.（可以用and also嗎?還是應(yīng)該改成but also?）
事實(shí)上是中介寫(xiě)的，我看了感覺(jué)有點(diǎn)問(wèn)題才問(wèn)的
中介說(shuō)第三句是老外寫(xiě)的，沒(méi)有錯(cuò)。。。