有些不一定是語法錯(cuò)誤,只是說法不客氣,很生硬：
Chinese cannot always understand the ‘special’ aesthetics of Americans.Those who we chinese see as“ugly” girls like BaiLing and LvYan can be big stars in the us.There is a saying :Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.It means that different people hold different beauty standards.The difference between Chinese and American aesthetics is a good example.
An old Chinese saying goes:A thing is valued in proportion to its rarity.Most native chinese have small eyes and small nose,so we believe that those with big eyes and high-arched nose are beautiful.But in the eyes of Americans ,small eyes and small nose seem to be more exquisite.Another Chinese saying goes:A white complexion is glamorous enough to conceal seven flaws.Chinese consider that a beautiful girl must have a fair complexion since most of us are yellow .But Americans think that people who have chocolate color skin are more healthy.
The Chinese aesthetics is tending to be delicate and quiet .We separate the beauty of dynamic from the beauty of static.We are too much into the look.If one is not perfect in his or her appearance,he will not be recognized as a beautiful boy or girl.We don’t like those with strong personality.Actually we never think of the personality when we define whether a person is beautiful or not.American aesthetics is totally different from ours.They focus not only on one’s appearance,but also on his or her disposition.A beautiful person must be full of confidence and vitality.Angelina Jolie is a good example.She is recognized as the Most Beautiful woman in the world---not because she has an exquisite face,but because she is full of passion and bold in action.
P.S.lz定冠詞用的太多了,該不該用的地方全用,單復(fù)數(shù)也有很大問題,主謂很多不一致.本人水平有限也就改成這樣了,其中仍然有數(shù)處用詞不妥,且構(gòu)句十分中文化,就不再修改了,否則就變成新寫一片了,觀點(diǎn)就更不做評價(jià),不過語法錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)該是沒有了.