1.she went to take part in a party .這個直接是she went to a party 或者she took part in a party 不過took part in 一般用于比較正式場合如參加會議等.
2.because somrthing 拼寫錯誤,估計(jì)你是不小心打錯了.something
不過我覺得這句話可以改成because of something wrong,she went into a hole with her rabbit .感覺會更順點(diǎn)
3.A journey is full of risks has happened in the hole is是謂語的話不能再用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),full of risk 可以當(dāng)成狀語.同時(shí)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)是指過去發(fā)生的事情持續(xù)到現(xiàn)在或者對現(xiàn)在任由影響的.這里用感覺有點(diǎn)小別扭,不過我個人覺得沒錯吧- -因?yàn)槿绻奈矣X得過去式可能更不合適.改：a journey that full of risks has happended in the hole
我就看出這么多啦,不過初一作文能寫成這樣不錯啦~想當(dāng)年偶初一英語作文可是慘不忍睹滴~這么早就會用not only but also 句型了.這可是我們高中常用句型的說啊,還有only in this way can we..簡直是萬能王道句型.
羅嗦了一頓,希望能有用~